Explanation Writing!

Today we had the privilege to get our writing results back. In the past weeks our class done the explanation writing. My goal is to aim to get a 4a-5b, that means that I have to focus and get everything done on time. That also means that I have to make sure that I either get a score of 34/35 or else I can try and get a 36/38. I have tried my hardest to try and get to a score of 31-32 and 36-38. This is what my writing looked like. I think that I really do need to try my hardest to achieve my goal.