Tena Koe Sheeandra, A great reflection. At least you realise what you need to do to maintain your perfect scores. 'I did really good' instead of 'I done really good'. Also, we've been focusing on eliminating unneccessary words. Can you see any words in this post? Nga mihi Na Whaea Gaylene
Hey Whaea. Yes I did see unnecessary words, that's why I fixed it up. I will make sure that I try and leave out all of the unnecessary words out next time. Thanks for the comment whaea. Bye . =)
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ReplyDeleteA great reflection. At least you realise what you need to do to maintain your perfect scores. 'I did really good' instead of 'I done really good'. Also, we've been focusing on eliminating unneccessary words. Can you see any words in this post?
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Na Whaea Gaylene
Hey Whaea. Yes I did see unnecessary words, that's why I fixed it up. I will make sure that I try and leave out all of the unnecessary words out next time. Thanks for the comment whaea. Bye . =)
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