My Papa's Tangi😑

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Oh my gosh, what would you do if you had to deal with something like this. On one sad Saturday my family and I went to my papa’s tangi. There I am standing still like a stunned mullet, I was really shocked that this has happened. I went to see my papa, “Wow” he looks so great. My papa passed away from cancer, so to all of you out there… be careful. I look over to see my Nan, she was balling with tears and her heart was broken. “Kia Ora moko” she whispered “Hi Nan”, my eyes were shattering looking at my Nan. You be strong Nan. “Have a great day” I whispered.