Hidden Court

WALT improve our writing by carefully checking our sentences and trying to add descriptive language.

My next step is to try and add more descriptive language into my writing and to build up on my vocabulary.

Hidden Court

Yay! I screamed in a happily voice “Were going on an adventure.” We were walking for ages it was like a good old 20 minutes till we got there. My legs were so sore they felt like sloppy pancakes.

My heart was beating so fast like a train because I thought that we were nearly there,we walked through a big bush and we saw a hidden tennis court with heaps of moss on it. We finally had a

Game of tennis I was winning until Letisha came along . She was like a stalker stalking me and Heaven until she popped out of nowhere. A few minutes later we were walking home for a feed

And stopped at something really huge it looked like a monster it was big it was huge and it was…….. A hidden mansion. We tried to open it but it was locked like a locked treasure box

We walked around the mansion and we saw a swimming pool I was so so full of joy. My eyes felt like tennis balls were falling out of them my jaw felt like it dropped straight onto my legs.

When we arrived at home we had to ask if we could try and clean out the pool but it was to green so we asked if we could go to the hidden tennis court again and they said sure you can.

Finally we found the hidden tennis court and the hidden mansion.