Lollies in the creepy church.

This week I have been learning to plan a recount that will maintain audience interest through content, and language choices.

I think I was successful because I was adding detail about the creepy church.

My next step is to try and focus on my recount writing.

Come on let’s go mum said “okay everybody hop out of the car”. We hopped out of the car and went into the kitchen for a kai. We were at the marae eating potato salad with delicious chocolate brownies and peanut brownies. I felt pure bliss as soon as I bit into the beautifully brownie. Once I saw my aunts I shouted happy birthday. I was so overjoyed when I saw all of the food on the table. My eyes were open so so wide at all of the food that was just spread out on the table.

Me and Tehanah had a race to see how many pockets of lollies we could fill up. Tehanah and I started to get bored so we went to go and eat our lollies over by the creepy church. The creepy church had ugly old rusty hooks up above my head with mashed ugly windows so if you saw it you will get the creeps.

Me and Te hanah filled up our pockets with lollies and went over to the creepy old rusty church to eat our lollies and play zombies. A few seconds later we had a lollies scramble with her lollies in that old rusty creepy church. Once me and Te Hanah turned around we saw a creepy mysterious thing just pop out of nowhere and it climbed out of the window it looked like it had tight fist.

Later on me and Tehanah decided to go back to the marae so our parents know where we are. But guess what I will never decide to go inside the old rusty creepy church again.

Who loves Geometry Because I do.

W.A.L.T describe 2D and 3D shapes using words such as edges, Faces and Vertices. Hope you Enjoy.

Reading task

I am learning to expand my reading vocabulary by working with a buddy to find word meanings

What do you know about Multiplying?

W.A.L.T multiply using place value. The hard thing about it was when I had to keep on restarting my movies over again.

Who loves persuasive writing.

W.A.L.T write a better persuasive then our old persuasive. Our new persuasive had to be more then 200 words.

I strongly recommend that we should be plastic bag free. If we were not plastic bag free we should use paper bags instead of using plastic bags. Did you know plastic bags are hurting animals life.

I know that plastic bags are biodegradable it will take for years to rot down. We should choose to use starch based bags or Fabric bags. If you see plastic bag you should pick it up and reuse it for carpets, clothes and crochet.

Secondly we should just reuse our plastic bags for carpets,clothes,crochet and many many more. Did you know that reusing your own plastic bags is the great thing to do. If you have a plastic bag and you didn’t know what to do with it you should reuse it.

Also what if people just throw their rubbish in the water it will float down stream and it can kill some animals. For example if you had a ripped plastic bag you should use paper bags.

In summary I strongly recommend that we should be plastic bag free. Agree or disagree.

Who likes to improve their goals.

Last week Room 5 was trying to learn their goals by the end of this term. Hope you enjoy.

Persuasive writing on the dot.

W.A.L.T group similar ideas into paragraphs.

My next step is to try and plan my main ideas without the teacher. The hardest part about it was when we had to group our ideas because I did not understand the teacher.. The tool that I was working on is google docs. I learnt how to persuade my reader and tell my reader what I was talking about.

I think that we should not take our waste to the landfill because it is bad for the environment.We should burn our rubbish instead of taking it to the landfill. You should try and start to recycle because if you don’t you will make our environment dirty.

Firstly you can recycle your own rubbish. Did you know when you recycle it goes through a big machine and then it gets reused? When you recycle you can take it to the landfill because it is getting recycled.

Secondly if you find some rubbish it can be reused. Reusing your own rubbish is the greatest thing to do. For example you can take your rubbish to the landfill because it will just be reused. It can always be able to go through a big machine only if it can be reusable waste.

Another thing is if you have biodegradable stuff you cannot take it to the landfill because you might get charged for what kind of waste it is. You should just take your rubbish and make a compost for you biodegradable waste.

In summary I believe that taking your rubbish to the landfill is bad because it will hurt the environment.