Who love phones well this is my persuasive writing of bringing phones to Tautoro School.

Who has fell in the water and got pushed from the current. Well this is a little bit about getting Rescued.

Who loves Bok Choy well who ever did they picked the right place.

Bok Choy.

 

I have been reading the book called the Bok Choy,it is written by Paul Mason.The type of this book is native book.This book is mostly about a man and a boy called Jacob and Ah sum,Jacob was a young boy and Ah sum is a gold miner. Jacob ends up in the Chinese village. Ah sum goes to pick some chinese cabbages  and Jacob doesn’t like them.The story is set in 1865 in Otago.Miss bishop  and her son william mock and be racist to Ah sum. Jacob was rescued by Ah sum.

My favorite  part was when  Jacob meets Ah sum. Did you know that In the 1860s,miners from China came to New Zealand to mine for gold. What have you been reading this week??

Hello I am learning to Connect my ideas together using different connectives and a variety of sentence beginnings.

I am learning to connect my ideas together using different connectives and a variety of sentence beginnings.

To be successful I will start sentences like this

• For example,
• Added to this,
• If … then
• In others words
• Plus

I think homework is important

One reason why I think homework is important is because it will help you to be successful.

For example you might have a  test and you have  homework that  can teach you about whatever your test is about. Added to this, homework is like a teacher but at home.

Another reason why I think homework is important is because you can get faster and faster at times tables by practising it. It can help you in things other than of maths too. For example, you can read too. Reading at home will help you move up in reading levels. When you have a reading test you will be able to read well because  you practice at home. Practice makes perfect!

My Second reason why I think homework is important is because when you grow up and get a job you will need to do extra work more than you really do.For another example when you do extra work you can get promoted and then you can be 2ic when the boss is not here

As I have said  homework is important it can make your dreams come true and make you be so successful.

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Our next learning steps are:

To have more background information in the introduction.

To independently use the correct structure for persuasive

To learn about and use emotive words in my writing.

My Focused learning goals.